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Lois pulled her dinner out of the microwave and set it on the table.
I am shocked she did not start a fire in this process.

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As she went to get a glass of water, she heard a soft tapping at her window. Glancing over she saw Clark… Superman standing on her fire escape.
frown she does not know that Clark is his real identity.

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While she ate, Superman continued to stare to her,
I think that should be "to stare at her".

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not with desire or boredom, but with a slight puzzled expression. Had Clark expected her to treat Superman differently since they had kissed? Ha!
Lois:Although his kisses are amazing, still, I can keep up my facade.

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After returning home, Lois had gone through every outfit in her closet, trying to decide what would be the appropriate thing to wear when your boyfriend came over,
hyper she is in Clark's arms.

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Lois smiled, glancing at him. “Why, yes, it is. It was a gift. Do you like it?”
You know, if she did not know that CK=SM, I really don't see her doing this with SM. So her claims nothing has changed really don't work.

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“I feel like such a fool, Superman,” Lois said, dropping to the bed in a huff. “How could I have not noticed them?”
Lois:Or that you are Clark.

Oh, there are so many places where she could drop that line.

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He moved to sit next to her, and then seemed to change his mind, shifting back to his normal A-frame position with his arms crossed and his feet shoulder width apart.
Lois:He won't be able to keep up the charade around me much longer.

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Was she somehow making him uncomfortable? She wondered.
Does she have no idea how much he wants her?

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She gazed at him, wishing this whole ruse was over and done with so she could rush into his arms.
dance she wants to be in his arms. Hmm, I really don't see why she insists on keeping up her pretenses.

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She felt bad for yelling at Jonathan so horribly that morning.
dance She is even reassumring Clark, let's hope he listenes.

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Lois lifted her head to focus her gaze on him. “Excuse me?” She had heard of role playing before, but this took the cake. Did ‘Superman’ not know of their ruse?
No, he just is not sure if he really believes she still loves him.

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“No!” she exclaimed, holding out her hand to stop him.
This makes me pretty sure she did not set this situation up intentionally.

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“… it might be a little too much,” Lois finished. She sighed and flopped back onto her bed.
I can totally see Lois wording things this way.

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slightly surprised that Jerome hadn’t returned yet.
Making love with Lois is more fun than going back to Kansas.

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He had said he was going to Metropolis to have Superman’s presence felt even if ‘Clark’ was officially out-of-town. He hoped to add confusion to anyone who might think they knew he was Superman.
However if you thought CK=SM, then SM being halfway arcoss the country from CK would not really work against that theory.

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Martha and Jonathan had guessed the true reason Jerome went was to see Lois.
Jonathan:Most men like to see their wives.

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“She’s right,” Jerome had told Jonathan, when they came in for lunch. “I already disappeared without word once this week. I shouldn’t have left town without speaking to her directly.”
I like that they both admit they were wrong.

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“But you’ve broken up,” Jonathan had rebutted.
But it was a fake breakup.

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“She still loves me,” Jerome had responded.
I only wish I was sure he believed that.

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“And I still love her. She deserves the consideration I didn’t give her.”
Maybe he should not take Perry's advice on dealing with women. It never worked for Jimmy.

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“How’s Metropolis?” he asked, and they both knew he meant Lois.
Is there any story where Clark regularly calls Lois "Metropolis".


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