John: Wow! Thanks for the long and terrific FDK and for catching all those errors. blush I'll respond in more detail later, when I have more time. I would like to spend part of my free time to actually writing today as I don't much free time. My Betas are chomping on the bit for me to send them 65 and I'm only 10 pages into it.

Maybe I'll switch around those Hank and Clark scenes a bit for the Archive version. Thanks for the suggestion.

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So where are Hank and Jimmy at this moment?
Hank is somewhere between his truck and the barn (where all this action is taking place). Jimmy is still under arrest and in the back of the sheriff's patrol car.

VirginiaR.
"On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling"
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"clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.