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I think the best person to ask about elipses is CC Aiken .

Any who, Digitalsky, is it? Name sounds kinda familiar... You strike me as a sort of "Simon" of fanfic, hard to impress. That can be a good thing---excellent critics force the artists to raise their standards. However, as others have said, sweeting your words a little can make the critique more digestable. Not that I'm the best person to ask, of course.

And David, don't forget I have your leg!!! Post the next part, ASAP!!! You can't just leave us hanging around Clark's door!!!