Hey Dave, I'm way behind in keeping up with fic these days, however your FDK thread count caught my eye so I'm making time for this one.
And I'm glad I did! So far so good, I'm liking where you're taking this fic
But
I actually thought Digitalsky had some valid points with his/her constructive critism. Be careful with over using that ellipse
Digitalsky, you may not have handled the situation the best, especially in this fandom where we are very protective of our writers, but don't let that scare you off. Constructive criticism is important
and Dave's an Aussie, I'm sure he can take it.
Now Dave, footy season is over, rugby season is over, we've qualified for the world cup and no one really cares about the A league anyway, so you have no excuse not to write!
PS. You can write and watch cricket at the same time
