Originally Posted by Endelda
I always love it when you write about the early days of Lois and Clark's romantic relationship, and this is definitely living up to your standard.

Aww, E, thanks so much! What a sweet compliment! ((HUGS))

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Originally Posted by Endelda
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"So, " Clark paused looking around the elevator car. "Would you care to examine the carpet too or do you want to just talk about what's bothering you?"
The elevator banter cracked me up rotflol
<snork> I'm glad you liked this part. I had a lot of fun playing with these two in this scene.

Originally Posted by Endelda
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Perry held up a sheet of paper and ripped it in half. “I’m assuming the issues –whatever they may be—have been worked out and I don’t have to file this?”

I love Perry 'MatchMaker' White!

Oooh! New nickname! I likey!

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He glanced at the car door that was slightly ajar and tapped it closed, not noticing the small metal capsule that rolled out as he walked away.

I'm intrigued and excited to watch this unfold!

Thanks for reading, E! Glad you liked it so far.

Chapter 2 is now up.

~ Folc4evernaday

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