Originally Posted by Terry Leatherwood
To correct my earlier spelling: Hit me with your best shot!

Oh, well, you did anyway.

Of course! [Linked Image]

Originally Posted by Terry Leatherwood
You gave them a very nice morning after in the beginning of the chapter. That was good of you, considering what you did at the end. evil !

Well, it can't all be action! [Linked Image]

Originally Posted by Terry Leatherwood
Dr. Klyburn has stayed away from the piano long enough to analyze the chip from the blast that killed the DA. And that information is going to the police. Will it go where it needs to go?

[Linked Image] [Linked Image] Maybe... wink

Originally Posted by Terry Leatherwood
Sean McCarthy is about to trigger another blast. Where? And who's the target?

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Originally Posted by Terry Leatherwood
Mayson's erratic behavior has caught the attention of police brass, but they're legally limited in what they can do. Legally, that is...

[Linked Image] The frustration is definitely starting to mount.

Originally Posted by Terry Leatherwood
Ah. McCarthy's target - illegal workers and illicit drugs. You've shown us how a sociopath thinks, and he may have gone too far this time. Intergang will be after him. And Superman will save as many lives as he can.

Oh, McCarthy is most definitely evil and twisted and very aware of the fact that he's triggering the head of Intergang.

Originally Posted by Terry Leatherwood
Mayson's back out among sane citizens, and it's possible she'll blame Lois for everything that's going crazy in her world. It's certain she still thinks Lois tried to blow her to smithereens. She'll want payback now.

Yep! dizzy

Originally Posted by Terry Leatherwood
Superman to the rescue! Yay! And he's truly angry that McCarthy not only endangered innocents (illegals, yes, but they didn't sign up to be victims) of his revenge scheme. The mad bomber's days of freedom are numbered in the low double digits, if that many.

smile1 Superman to the rescue!

Originally Posted by Terry Leatherwood
Jimmy's back, too! The fact that his mind is now clear gives us hope that Mayson can be helped effectively. Of course he's gonna bust his butt getting as much information to Clark and Lois as he can. And they'd better not let him near Rollie Vale when this is over.

Go Jimmy! hyper

Originally Posted by Terry Leatherwood
But the second stalker (I still think it's unconscious Mayson) is still harassing her. Once can be ignored, twice can make you wary, a pattern of such acts will make you jumpy and cost you sleep and hinder clear thinking. Lois is close to that point now.

I will not confirm or deny anything. You'll find out in the next chapter. Which is the end of this lovely twisted tale. evil

Originally Posted by Terry Leatherwood
McCarthy has angered the head of Intergang, and it's going to be bloody. Will Bill Church's minions - or Superman - find McCarthy before he blows up CostCo's main office? Stay tuned!

lol It will all come to a head.

Originally Posted by Terry Leatherwood
Now Henderson's in play. He's enlisted Superman to be on the lookout for Mayson, and when he finds her she might be pointing a weapon at Lois. Doesn't bode well for her physical health.

Mayson will be pushed to her breaking point next chapter.

Originally Posted by Terry Leatherwood
STAR Labs is a player, too. How much you wanna bet they'll come up with a way to jam the transmissions to those microchips, maybe even override them? With Klyburn and Stone on the job, anything's possible.

Will they or won't they? confused

Originally Posted by Terry Leatherwood
McCarthy seems to have come unhinged, too. One man declaring war on a city? And expecting to survive? Dan Scardino to the rescue! (Bet no one ever wrote that before.)

Well it takes a certain level of psychotic in order to kill innocent people without a care in the world. devilsplat angel-devil

Originally Posted by Terry Leatherwood
And you leave us with Mayson armed and holding Lois and her police escort hostage. Great. I don't suppose you'll bring Zara and Ching into the picture now, will you? I'm not sure how else to stir up this cauldron of chaos.

lol Zara and Ching?! lol That's an interesting thought but nope!

Originally Posted by Terry Leatherwood
And now I want the next chapter! Any time you're ready, Val! Bring it on! I'm more than ready! devilsplat

Final Chapter is up!


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