I just re-read your revised version of Part 4. clap I really like your changes. It fleshes out the story and leaves the reader with no questions, save one. Sooooooo, how many kids did Lois and Clark end up with? wink Just joking.

I love how Luthor doesn't escape justice by (intentionally) killing himself. He deserved to spend much more than his 13 months in jail, though.

Great job! Thanks for sharing this revised version with us. smile

VirginiaR.
"On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling"
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"clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.