Wonderful conclusion
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I have to agree with Lynn--I enjoyed your take on the revelation. It was a nice, different change to see Clark be able to explain everything to Lois, and for Lois to accept and understand Clark in a more forthcoming matter.
I had never read a story where Superman had a lead-lined suit made to help counter-effect Kryptonite. So for me, that was a really interesting way of thinking. It makes a ton of sense, and really, I'm surprised we don't hear more about this idea. The hood, also...how helpful was that?
I was impressed by how you were able to have a totally different story than the one we know, BUT be able to use some of the same great dialogue from the script. That's really awesome how you could still work different quotes into your story--even with all the changes that you made to the end of the first season. Very cool!
I'm really glad you continued this piece--it's been a joy to read these last four parts
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Laura
