need to let this out before go to work...
1. super-like the epilogue, haha. not ony you give details to what happened to everyone involved in the story, but I also like how Lex Luthor finally meet his end. out of curiosity, why did you kill him? or why did he died?
2. several parts of the story fall into flat naration,which makes it a little bit boring compared to other parts...but still worked well into the plot
3. well, I'm a bit disappointed about how you resolved the Ordinary Guy-Kal El/Superman/Clark Kent conflict...Clark Kent made the Kal El persona forgettable here, unlike Lois made in depth character analysis on Ordinary Guy
overall, your story is great,especially on how Superman act deceiving Luthor and the epilogue (not to mention a completely peaceful HoL/BaTP)
