Hi Lynn!
Thanks for reading and commenting!
I enjoyed the final part of this story. I would have liked to have been shown some of the things we were just told about, however. For example, I always love seeing Lois interacting with the Kents, especially when she is first getting to know them. I would have liked to have seen the brief description of her time on the farm greatly expanded. It would have been nice to read some of the discussions they had had, for example.
I agree with you and will be rewriting those sections. Lois definitely needs to have her Martha and Jonathan time shown rather than just told. I'll be rewriting those sections and will post the update when done.
I think yours may have been the most gentle revelation I have ever read. I like the way that Clark introduced the topic and that Lois didn't freak out at all, but accepted his discussion so matter-of-factly. Her having given so much thought to Ordinary Guy helped her, I'm sure, to accept his explanation without her usual hysterics.
Thank you. I think showing what happened in Smallville will also strengthen the believability of this section. Thanks for the suggestion!
And once again, I enjoyed how you were able to strike a wonderful balance in both sticking to and deviating from canon.
Glad that you liked it. You're right it was a balancing act, but a fun one!
Thanks for reading and commenting!
