Hey Virginia

I didn't see any grammar issues thumbsup

As to some of the questions...

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2) Plot twists and cliffhangers make you chortle with glee.
(I've changed laugh to chortle, hope nobody minds)
--chortle is great...gives it more personality clap

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6) Your characters (or self) slip on the obvious banana peel.
or should that be "proverbial banana peel"?
--my first thought is 'proverbial'--the sentence seems to flow better, but that's just IMO wink

Going to be hard to narrow this list down--lots of great ones!

Laura

"Where's Clark?" "Right here."

...two simple sentences--with so much meaning.

~Lois and Clark in 'House of Luthor'~