An extra chapter? Very blessèd
I like how you're rotating through different perspectives. I think it was utilized especially well for Henderson to establish his line of thought for what happened to Clark. As I was reading through, I thought Henderson would jump and get that Clark is Superman, but it makes sense that he doesn't come to that conclusion. Also, it very interesting to see how actions get interpreted differently—Clark thinking that he's successfully hidden his burns, and Henderson being able to see right through him.
I'm loving how weighty everything feels. Thick with dramatic tension and all that:
Fighting tears, he headed back to bed, idly wondering, if his powers never returned, perhaps he would never have to wear glasses again.
Oof. May his powers return soon. Or not
