When this story was idling in a scribbler (because I hadn't deemed it worthy of a computer write up yet!), I couldn't figure out how to get beyond the first chapter. It was Henderson's perspective that launched the rest of the fic, surprisingly. He originally wasn't going to be a 'participant,' yet ended up being my personal catalyst.
I know that phenomenon all too well. Happened to me quite a few times. I was stuck with To Love and To Lose until Lois suddenly decided that she'd figure out Clark's secret early on in the story. And all of a sudden Clark was forced to talk to her, which he'd refused until then.
Okay, now to your story. I like how Perry and Henderson protect Clark. I think they've both figured out his secret. You've really got me hooked. I'm already biting my nails waiting for the next installment.
Great work!
