KatherineKent: 
Yea! KK arrived for her review.
Inspired by KatherineKent’s suggestion
Woo hoo! You're posting. I've been waiting and waiting for this. Yay.
Yeah, I know this took forever. It was slow writing those last few parts of Wrong Clark. Thank you for posting your new story, too.
I'm going to have to be careful with my comments, though. Don't want to give anything away!
Please!
Gentle readers, as winner of this past spring's auction, KK won the opportunity to supply me with a plot and read the story before anyone else.
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She received her copy MONTHS ago.
Me, too.
Can I have some of those?
Um... KK, I think you're great but we don't really have that kind of relationship.
I usually get my fill by writing them.
Clark could never be one-sided or stereotypical.
Well, there was that time that Woody Samms stole his body...
Hmm, I wonder if he really was cardboard in the dream. You know, turn him sideways and you can see the edge ... the cardboard ridges.
Hmmmm. I wonder if a cardboard cutout of Clark could give you knee-melting kisses or merely paper cuts.
Hmm, I wonder what Clark was doing in this dream. Something, clearly, un-Clark-like. Okay, so instead of sweet, genuine, caring ... he was rude, fake, dismissive?
/Points to Woody Samms reference above/
Ahh, a jerk, only after ... you know.
See, stereotypical man. Nothing like Clark.
One: Clark was a true gentleman.
Oh, absolutely. And, by the way, sooo glad you managed to show this throughout the fic.
Thank you. I love that side of his character.
Okay, so the Clark from her dream was only interested in 'looks', not personality and substance. Ahh. No wonder he was cardboard/one-dimensional.
Eeeks! What if Ralph switched bodies with Clark? /shivers in disgust/
Clark is such a gentleman, but I wonder if Lois wanted him to want to see inside her bedroom!
LOIS: Clark finally wants to see my bedroom, only to examine my alarm clock. Gee, lucky me.
And even though she's smiling I think there is disappointment inside her heart.
Yeah, it's one of those sad smiles you put on your face when you've been proven right, only when she want to be proven wrong.
Ummm, the ominous drums are playing in my head ... Mayson is on the horizon, isn't she?
In the next part actually...
Clark's smiling ... just cause it's a nice day, and just cause he's with Lois, and so many other lovely things, but Lois thinks he smiling because of the blonde - I guess.
Well, Lois's neighbor's husband thinks she hot (she does have what -- 4 kids?), ergo Clark must think she's hot too.
Clark being gentlemanly again! Lois will get rather fed up ... and I notice something of a pattern emerging ... but gonna keep my lips sealed.
Yes, Clark's a sweetie, who only seems to help out attractive women.
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LOIS: Duh! He's male!
CLARK:
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Lois noticed.
Okay Lois has mentioned at least four woman from Clark's past who have shown interest in him ... for someone who had little respect for her partner when they first met she sure took notice of who took notice of him.
Well, being HER partner means he's not allowed to have any other women talk to him without her strict written permission, which she'll never give.
PERRY: Lois...
LOIS: What? That sounds fair.
Woo Hoo. Lois should definitely tell him how she feels. And it's bound to go completely without hitch. Why would anything ever go wrong?
Um... because I wrote the story?
Fantastic first part Virginia. Can't wait for the rest.
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Are you saying that I'm just full of WAFF!!! I resent that remark ... I can write angst ... I think, sometimes, I've ... uh...
Okay, I hate angst.
That's not true. You have plenty of conflict in your stories.
