Hmm. The humor sounds a lot like Queen of the Capes (I thought Terry too at first, but I dunno--might take a close look at his shorter stuff). I might have to peruse some of her work more closely...
But I really liked it! It was chock full of witty dialogue and the ending...well I can't say no to a well-timed double entendre.
*rubs hands in glee*
I will find you, author X!
*cackles*
alcyone
