What a completely fabulous story! It was very strongly reminiscent of somebody I can't exactly put my finger on. Oh, this is frustrating.

I especially like the way it seems to evolve, one revelation at a time. At first, I thought it was a first season story, given the way Lois was griping, then I thought it was second season, then I thought they were just going out and then it was revealed they were married. All the way up to Lois's pregnancy. Extremely well -written, I'll say that.

Oh dear. I can only point to the usual suspects. The quality of writing indicates Sue, but the humour seems to be more Queenie's style. I may die of curiosity.

“Is he dead, Lois?”

“No! But I was really mad and I wanted to kick him between the legs and pull his nose off and put out his eyes with a freshly sharpened pencil and disembowel him with a dull letter opener and strangle him with his own intestines but I stopped myself just in time!”
- Further Down The Road by Terry Leatherwood.