Paul,
I didn't have much to say re the story (I read detective stories, I don't write 'em
), but it was great fun to read. Yes, do archive this! And I agree that a simple epilogue in which you "take off your glasses and put on your own," so to speak, is the perfect solution.
i'm also sorry to hear that the universes have been so uncooperative. all that pesky free will and chaotic anti-determinism must really get in your way sometimes.
Oh, yeah. You tell him!
I agree that this would have been more fun if a few more "characters" would have joined the fray, but it was quite satisfying as is. Thanks for starting this, Paul!
Hazel, who can't help wondering in Yvonne ever plans to archive OUATIM...
