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Unfortunately, it would take an even deeper examination of each of the lives of Tempus’s ancestors to discover which of them Superman, Clark, or one of his descendants had saved.
Maybe it was Lois who did the saving, but without Clark there, she did not feel kind hearted enough to save the person.

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but Herb found it difficult to take the word of a person who turned his wife into a rat merely because Herb had accidentally tripped and fallen against her.
This actually fits with what the Sorcerer said. Him rushing to false conclusions makes sense.

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During these last few months of research in the future, Herb had begun to wonder if it was even necessary to find a cure.
Maybe he should have thought of this before telling Clark of the cure.

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Clark had said that he had discovered the reincarnated soul of this universe’s Kal-El in a Catholic priest down in Brazilian rainforest.
I think it would flow better as "in the Brazilian rainforest."

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Then again, how different were the souls of this universe’s Clark and that of the man whom Herb had brought here to find love?
I thought Wells brought Clark here for a vacation, not to find love.

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Perhaps, too, the search for an answer was moot. It was entirely possible that Miss Lane had never forgiven Clark for whatever liberties he had taken while she was drunk on the pheromone perfume
Saying Clark took "liberties" with her really does not add up. She begged him all the way. At that, she seems to have largely forgiven him immediately, and if anything kept an initial resentment that he had not gone further.

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Herb reconsidered the scenario he had created to explain Clark’s odd behavior and decided that it was highly implausible.
Good, because it totally was.

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A part of the time traveler wondered if he should have done the same when he had discovered that Clark and Miss Lane had married on Valentine’s Day and checked into the Lexor Honeymoon suite.
Yes, that would have been a better course of action.

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…er…Lois Kent would, in fact, die.
party at the use of our favorite name.


John Pack Lambert