John: Thanks for the detailed FDK. laugh

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Clark is draming of Lois. I am especially glad to see he is able to do so withoyut dwelling on what he cannot have.
Well, since it's the only way he can have Lois...

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So he didn't really "place a call to their room". I at least interpret that line to mean the room phone, and have to admit at first I thought you had contradicted yourself, but on further thought decided technically this explanation works, I guess.
Originally, I was going to have him call the phone in the suite, and then I wanted her to have a reason to leave her mobile phone at her apartment, to re-charge, so I switched it. It never made sense to me, why someone with a mobile phone (as shown in GGGoH) would use a payphone in ASU. I'll take another look at that paragraph and try to smooth out those bumps. Thanks.

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Lois wants to be with Clark.
In the words of the great Tempus: Duh!

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Wait, why are they meeting at her apartment?
So, she can drop off her overnight bag and recharge her mobile phone.

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he is procrastinating telling her, again.
He's really good at coming up with excuses. laugh

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Clark:But there really is no time.

Reader:I still can grumble about it.
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But something will probably come up before then, making it seem he should have told her now.
cool

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Well, at least he wants to tell her.
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Is this a clone?
No. wink

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Only the cheek. OK, maybe I am coming to expect too much affection from our characters.
She's in a hurry to drop her stuff off at her apartment, so they can go to breakfast and get to the office on time. Also, I don't want them seen kissing on the streets where anyone tailing her might see it.

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Clark:Hey, this is better than back when she wanted nothing to do with me, or was actually mad at me.
True.

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I guess most people do not plan to rush to work at the end of their stay at the honeymoon suite.
Or somebody delayed her on purpose?

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Hey, those can be healthy, like bran muffins.
Clark doesn't like bran muffins.

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A bagel with cream cheese?

JOHN: Sounds healthy to me.
Debatable. <<funny thing, when spell checking this word, the other option was delectable.... which also works IMO. laugh >>

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They are really kissing.
Well, I did mention more kissing in this story than canon.

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Clark:That is what boyfriends are for.
LOIS: If he keeps that up, I might have to agree to call him that.

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Why not just stay lip-locked to her apartment.

Lois:It is hard to walk while kissing.

Clark:Yeah, she might start to notice the floating.

Lois:Floating? What are you talking about.

Clark:Oh, Look at the time.
clap I didn't think of that. True.

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The fact that he did not follow makes it more likely to be a memory than just a dream.
Interesting analysis.

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How exactly did canon Clark ever explain that? I always assumed Lois was so obsorbed with worrying about the wave she just did not notice where he was, but if she went searching, hmm.
I always wondered about that. Maybe she thought he ran off in a different direction.

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Tell her, Clark.
CLARK: I'm Superman. Hey, look at the time. Let's get to work.

LOIS: splat

No, I don't think that'll work.


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