This really was a great introduction. You see Lois holding her own against the "blokes," and you see Clark taking up his role of defender! I've really enjoyed looking over this--the Australianisms are really fun. Definitely makes me want to visit Australia! And it gives this fanfic a distinctive flavor that really marks it as unique.

I really like Lois's money move here. It's nice of her to do that for a stranger. It's not something many people would think of, and I think it's great that she does it.