Oh man, you convey tragedy without an ounce of melodrama. I so envy you that, and really admire your voice.
I *loved* Jimmy's choked-up vow of support for Clark. Bill Henderson's clenched fist. Clark counting the days, minutes since Lois. Such a poignant, effective... gut-kick.
And most especially, because it felt so completely real:
I feel like a ghoul, he thought. I’m cataloging other people’s reactions and recording them for future consideration.
But it diverted him, however slightly, however momentarily, from his own black thoughts.
Wonderful.
CC