Actually not for me. Just Lois being Lois, I mean she and Clark are talking along during the Hot Match Wild Card date discussing the ins and outs of the pact situation and she just blurts “Okay, then. You’re on. As of this moment we are officially engaged.” out of the blue so why not “Because I’m completely in love with you,” just as she is bolting
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I am loving the story and the only thing seemly forced in the chapter was Perry's declaration but as I have said before these two always seem to need some outside force to push them into moving forward in their relationship. You claimed initially of a much different dynamic between the two in your universe but in much of the past several chapters the dynamic is almost the normal Lois and Clark dynamic we are used to seeing. I guess you have to move that way if you are to actually get them to the alter in 5 more chapters...
Mike
