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Originally posted by John Lambert:
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Lois glanced at Superman, and he had the nerve not to even look the least bit sheepish. It took every ounce of her restraint to not to mention owls at that particular moment.
I think you just want to say "to not mention". You use "to" too many times.
Fixed, John. Thanks. Actually, I believe it should be "not to mention" otherwise I'm splitting hairs or something. wink


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