Originally posted by John Lambert:
In re-readin I noticed that first you speak of "canals", but then the next two times it is "the canal". It seems a bit inconsistent.
Thanks. Fixed.
I think it should say "How could he not know".
Yes. Thanks.
On another note, maybe that is the real reason why Clakr and Lana broke up in canon. She didn't like him eating all those sweats.
Lana was annoyed and worried Clark might embarrass them on their wedding day, but not enough to dump him because of it (unless of course, he actually threw up on her wedding dress).
I think that should be "concentrate on your".
Right again. Thanks.
I think it should be "ever to say". It might work the way it is, but it feels to me like it needs the to.
Yes, it sounds better with the "to". Thanks. All fixed.
