Wow. That's all I can say about the first chapter is Wow.
What a great beginning! Clark, outed as Superman. Loss of the life he wanted. Loss of being at work with Lois. Loss of his privacy, his hometown, his normal life. How can he ever get over this?
And what about Lois and Perry? They're wrestling with the knowledge that they did wrong, and I love how you portray them.
I hope that you'll do flashbacks and tell us how Lois found out, and what prompted her to publish it. You have touched on why Perry went along with her, but will we see more of Perry's reaction to Lois's story?
I'm eagerly awaiting more.
