Well I wasn't sure I was going to like the story from the description and the first few paragraphs but boy was I wrong! I echo the comments you have received so far. I can only add that this story has me hooked and like everyone else I can not wait for the next chapter.
I am loving the way you use all of the characters but especially Jimmy. It is nice to see him get some significant exposure and in such an important role. I can't wait to see how you continue because the first chapter would have been a potential award winning super short story all by itself.
Until next week.
Mike
