Oh, that's not the kind of editing you were referring to?
No, it probably should be a bit of a rewrite of some parts…You know, like when you take care of a bonsai tree.
Because sometimes, the speaker *is* exclaiming a question.
Yeah…I know. And they do it in comics all the time, don’t they?
And the third, well, don't we call those "red herrings"?
I guess…?
You did read Nightfall Honeymoon, didn't you? I danced that line all the way to edge... well, consummation is allowed on Gfic side, just not specifically detailed as on the other side. You know that.
yeah, I know. I know. It’s just, the entire idea of setting a story up for that one purpose on the gfic side, it just seems…odd. Like you’re cheated out of the climax or something of the sort.
Michael
