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MAYSON: That line was removed in negotiation.
LEX: splat Bender!
No Sheldon will need to substitute for the wife?
BENDER: help
LEX: Hmm…no, we’re good here. Ohhh…Mrs. Co-ox!

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CLARK: So, this wasn't part of some elaborate game show?
The mad Lois having given the game away?

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Isn't that what G.E.'s are for?
No! That…that…that would be G.E. abuse! [Linked Image] They should only find the odd spelling, punctuation, or grammar mistake that slipped past all the EWs, Betas, and ERs…

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Oh, you mean, you're scared what you might find on re-reading your first story (i.e. it won't match up to your memory of it?).
No, I *know* what’s buried in there. Like for instance ‘*RRRRIIIIINNNNG*’ (or some spelling of the likes), possibly some ‘!?’ double punctuation. And some Checkov’s Guns that were never fired because *someone* couldn’t figure out whether to go left or right.

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I find editing Nfic stories into Gfic stories much more difficult than it sounds.
[Linked Image] Especially when the entire plot actually is set up to get Lois and Clark naked and into very close quarters and then you think, okay, most of that story works as PG-13. But should they still consummate their lust or should we remove that part because it’s kind of gratuitous. But then the ending kind of sucks…bad…and you would lose the dangling plot twist at the end which requires a previous consummation for the right oomph. wallbash

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If you mean: <security requiring a kiss at the end>
If you mean: <store-bought security>
Funny how it works both ways, huh? You’d think that I chose ‘bat’ intentionally, huh? angel-devil

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