When I saw it in the e-mail about the new story I immediately assumed it was the story you won the Beta'ing from Wendy. It seemed the right type of story and around the correct time frame as to when you would get done. Anyway, as you would probably expect, I loved it and I STILL have the story you will work with Wendy on to look forward to... The ending twist was perfect and the Lois thought process was just about perfect (How big the headline would determine if she truly loved him).
I am torn because as with groobie I would really like a nice sequel but on the other hand leaving it with us to determine how it works out is nice also. At least this Lois does not fear intimacy like the canon Lois did, she went to the love word pretty quickly and easily here.
Mike
