I quite enjoyed this little tale. I felt the chemistry between Lois and Clark was starting to spark in the same way it did in Season One of the show.
I was a little unsure about why you made Jonathan lie. Was it because he didn't trust Lois to keep Clarks secret and had images of scientists dissecting Clark like a frog?
I guess we'll have to wait for a sequel to perhaps get more of an insight.
Thanks for sharing!!!
"He's my best friend, best of all best friends Do you have a best friend too It tickles in my tummy He's so Yummy Yummy Hey you should get a best friend too" - Toy Box
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