What is she, galactically stupid? *Pause while I collapse in a fit of narcissistic giggles over my own joke*
Actually, I'm hereish:
Though, at one point for some reason, I though Lois knew. Then at the end I realize she didn't.
I wondered if she suspected something, but then I thought, no she doesn't know anything. Then I got the feeling she knew Jonathan's story was a little stretched, so maybe she wonders if there's something off about them...but she doesn't know what.
Anyway, nice story! And as always lots of room for a sequel.
JD