Carol, I can see why you edited the post as you did, but despite the fact that Clark's list made me squirm, I have to agree that I completely understand why he feels this way toward Paul. The various torture methods are uncomfortable to read, but so what? Life can be uncomfortable. Clark has good reason to feel the way he does, and I think by telling us exactly what he wants to do to Paul, you allow us to see how Lois' assault deeply this impacts Clark as well. Personally, I hope you add at least some of what you took out back into this section. It seems realistic to me, and as I said, gives a greater impact. Clark is a sweet and caring guy who would never want to see anyone go through what Lois did, let alone his wife. Being sweet and gentle doesn't mean he doesn't have a right to get angry, and justifiably so!
