I loved seeing Lois convince Mayson that her marriage with Clark is real and unbreakable. I hope she convinced herself, while she was at it.

Like a few of the other readers, I really had difficulty reading Clark's torture wish-list. I found it jarring, both because I think it's out of character for Clark even to imagine that sort of thing (certainly those sorts of details), and because it made for fundamentally unpleasant reading. I'm sorry, but that's just my take on it, for whatever it's worth.

Still loving the story as a whole. Very interested to see where the Planet's and Henderson's investigations take them. And really hoping Lois puts on the nightgown before the last chapter!


Peace, Carolyn