It was really amazing how Lois changed during this story: in the beginning I didn't much like her, but she became one of the most mature versions of Lois. This you described really well.
In this final chapter, I especially liked how Lois realizes that she had maneged years without Superman - and can do so now, also.
There is one thing that I would like alter and that is, could at least some the emotional tension between Lois and Clark be solved in the end?
