Ahh... very nice. It's been great to read a long story from you again, Wendy. I love the shorter ones too, don't get me wrong, but a longer story just offers more scope...
I love the way Lois helped save herself. And this part made me sniffle:
Distress was stark in his voice; Lois wanted to go to him, comfort him - and comfort herself in the process. But the timing was wrong. He was there in his costume, as Superman. The last thing they could afford to do was have anyone link Superman too closely with Lois Lane.
Though my initial reaction was to think they should knock Lex unconscious so they could snuggle for a while
But, they finally got to hug, and a very nice hug it was, too!
It's been a fun ride, Wendy
PJ