Wow, I honestly think this was one of your better written chapters. You did a really great job on piecing it together. I hope you are happy with the product because I know as a reader I was.
I was a bit upset at first that she didn't find out but by the end of the chapter I understood why you did it and I think in the end it is better. She hasn't quite come to accept Clark yet and is only now feeling things for him (if ever so slowly).
Now though... I am totally curious about what they have of Superman's? Hmmm
I can't wait for more.
Thank you for sharing your wonderful talent with us.
