Sue, I just caught up with this series tonight and then *poof* there was a new installment! (Or should that be *proof*?) Anyway...yay!
This is wonderful stuff, each and every bit of it. You manage the tension between them so beautifully. When I got here:
"You should tell her," she finally whispered. "Just take a chance and tell her the truth."
He took a deep breath, his heartbeat pounding in his ears. "Lois, it's me. Kal-El."
I was literally holding my breath!
I like this build-up to the revelation considerably better than what they gave us in the tv series, and I like that Lois's response was hurt and angry, yes, but also controlled and rational.
And what a beautiful flying scene at the end of this part! Just lovely.
Thanks so much for this wonderful, sensual series. I've enjoyed every minute of it and will look forward to the nfic conclusion.
Best,
Caroline
