Like Laurach, I didn't even notice the ellipses. I was too busy sitting on the edge of my seat, reading the story!
Masterfully written, this story has totally pulled me in. I was actually going to suggest, tongue in cheek, that since Mere has announced an EOD schedule for her story, in a show of solidarity you should do the same. What a pleasant surprise to see that you are actually thinking of doing just that! Yes. Definitely EOD...
- Vicki
"Hold on, my friends, to the Constitution and to the Republic for which it stands. Miracles do not cluster and what has happened once in 6,000 years, may not happen again. Hold on to the Constitution" - Daniel Webster
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