Oooh, great part, Labby! I was getting chilly just reading that. Of *course* Lois would over-estimate her coat, city girl that she is. *shakes her head sadly* The "Not Superman... you know" reminded me of Aunt May. *giggle* And whee, they finally found the cabin!
The ellipsis and pauses didn't bother me. In fact, I took them for the pauses in breath that they were. Lois and Clark are obviously short of breath and extremely cold, so they wouldn't be able to force out full sentences in one breath. They'd have to keep pausing. It helped me imagine them talking, trying to force out the words.
And I'm all for a speeded up posting schedule!
