For me, as a writer, to capture action and make it feel real is nearly impossible.
Okay, having just choked on my Pepsi, reading this I have to just come in at this point and go
LabRat
Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly. Aramis: Yes, sorry. Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal.