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Posted By: LadyTpower FDK: This is me - 11/22/18 04:25 PM
make me happy with a little comment
Posted By: Mouserocks Re: FDK: This is me - 11/22/18 05:42 PM
Aww! Very sweet! Clark saving her from a brief tumble so soon after being rescued by Superman probably would have her drawing some conclusions. I also like how you had Lois handle it. Good reveal! Excited to see which episode you do next!

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Posted By: Morgana Re: FDK: This is me - 11/24/18 05:45 PM
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The pieces showed her the whole puzzle the moment that her mind went to the time that Clark had arrived at the daily planet and the moment Superman had arrived. It all fitted. She was going to keep quiet for now.

This is the reason why Lois Lane is the Daily Planet's Ace Investigative Reporter! She followed the clues and reached the proper conclusion. It's great that she does not have a temper tantrum and demands to know why Clark did not inform her about his other job. Slowly, but surely she lets him know what evidence there is.

Nicely done reveal Lady TPower!

I look forward to more of this story. thumbsup
Posted By: LadyTpower Re: FDK: This is me - 12/07/18 07:29 PM
chapter 3
Posted By: Mouserocks Re: FDK: This is me - 12/08/18 02:39 PM
Awww. I love the sweet little moments of them drinking tea on the couch, talking about their childhoods. Clark telling her he was adopted was a very nice moment.

Looking forward to more!
Posted By: SJH Re: FDK: This is me - 12/08/18 05:05 PM
when does partnership become friendship, friendship trust, and
trust become love: in perfect moments such as these.

Posted By: LadyTpower Re: FDK: This is me - 12/13/18 07:31 PM
chapter 4
Posted By: Morgana Re: FDK: This is me - 12/14/18 04:04 PM
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Clark startled but turned around to find the woman that brought the fire in his heart, only she didn't know it. His secret was out but this wasn't the time nor the place to answer her questions.

Fire in his heart? Yup that sounds like Clark. Thanks so much for this great little story to read during a cold and dreary week! dance
Posted By: LadyTpower Re: FDK: This is me - 12/14/18 05:03 PM
Originally Posted by Morgana
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Clark startled but turned around to find the woman that brought the fire in his heart, only she didn't know it. His secret was out but this wasn't the time nor the place to answer her questions.

Fire in his heart? Yup that sounds like Clark. Thanks so much for this great little story to read during a cold and dreary week! dance

thank you for the comment :-)
Posted By: LadyTpower Re: FDK: This is me - 12/19/18 06:49 PM
chapter 5
Posted By: LadyTpower Re: FDK: This is me - 12/28/18 07:12 PM
chapter 6
Posted By: LadyTpower Re: FDK: This is me - 01/06/19 05:11 PM
chapter 7
Posted By: LadyTpower Re: FDK: This is me - 01/15/19 10:16 PM
chapter 8
Posted By: LadyTpower Re: FDK: This is me - 01/28/19 07:11 PM
chapter 9
Posted By: LadyTpower Re: FDK: This is me - 02/10/19 03:39 PM
chapter 10
Posted By: LadyTpower Re: FDK: This is me - 02/22/19 07:28 PM
chapter 11: vatman
Posted By: groobie Re: FDK: This is me - 02/23/19 06:21 AM
Ah Vatman...yes, this certainly would have been an opportunity for Clark to be honest, and a rather obvious scene for Lois to have concluded the truth. I liked how Clark's sweet kiss was the key to helping Lois fit all of the puzzle pieces together. Good job!

Susan, who misses Barry deeply, but is sure that he loves his life with Wanda
Posted By: LadyTpower Re: FDK: This is me - 02/23/19 05:52 PM
Originally Posted by groobie
Ah Vatman...yes, this certainly would have been an opportunity for Clark to be honest, and a rather obvious scene for Lois to have concluded the truth. I liked how Clark's sweet kiss was the key to helping Lois fit all of the puzzle pieces together. Good job!

Susan, who misses Barry deeply, but is sure that he loves his life with Wanda

Thnx for your amazing comment. Yeah, it's a different but obvious way to reveal himself.
Posted By: Blueowl Re: FDK: This is me - 03/09/19 07:17 PM
I always like fics that go the honest route. There's just something about them that makes me get all bubbly inside. On to next chapter smile
Posted By: LadyTpower Re: FDK: This is me - 03/09/19 07:28 PM
Originally Posted by Blueowl
I always like fics that go the honest route. There's just something about them that makes me get all bubbly inside. On to next chapter smile

thank you for your comment. I love doing reveal stories and some episodes give some very good opportunities
Posted By: Blueowl Re: FDK: This is me - 03/09/19 08:28 PM
Nice tidbit with Jimmy and Perry in the All Shook Up ficlet. So awesome that Clark isn't in on that particular secret ^_^
Posted By: Blueowl Re: FDK: This is me - 03/09/19 09:31 PM
It's nice to see tender-Lois (Foundling). I loved whenever the show revealed her more compassionate side, showing exactly what Clark sees in her. :3
Posted By: LadyTpower Re: FDK: This is me - 03/10/19 02:15 PM
Originally Posted by Blueowl
Nice tidbit with Jimmy and Perry in the All Shook Up ficlet. So awesome that Clark isn't in on that particular secret ^_^

hehe everybody gets his chance for a secret :-)
Posted By: LadyTpower Re: FDK: This is me - 03/10/19 02:18 PM
Originally Posted by Blueowl
It's nice to see tender-Lois (Foundling). I loved whenever the show revealed her more compassionate side, showing exactly what Clark sees in her. :3

I love giving strong women like Lois a more sensitive side
Posted By: LadyTpower Re: FDK: This is me - 03/13/19 07:05 PM
chapter 12: Fly hard
Posted By: Blueowl Re: FDK: This is me - 03/14/19 12:25 AM
I always did feel that Jack knew. I do sorta wish that he had been in more episodes too, but I suppose he was like a second Jimmy?
Posted By: LadyTpower Re: FDK: This is me - 03/14/19 02:52 PM
Originally Posted by Blueowl
I always did feel that Jack knew. I do sorta wish that he had been in more episodes too, but I suppose he was like a second Jimmy?

I really liked Jack and I had a feeling that the moment he pulls Jack out of the bullets way that he knew. I still have a feeling that he saw the bullet bounce off Clarks arm. Same goes for Perry White, I still have a feeling that he knew who Superman was.
Posted By: LadyTpower Re: FDK: This is me - 05/18/19 06:49 PM
chapter 13
Posted By: JellyS2 Re: FDK: This is me - 05/19/19 01:50 AM
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If there was something that was worse than kryptonite than was it a crying Lois.

My favorite part. I love how you had her figure it out seeing it in his eyes and then he admitting it was true. Great job!
Posted By: LadyTpower Re: FDK: This is me - 05/19/19 01:04 PM
Originally Posted by JellyS2
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If there was something that was worse than kryptonite than was it a crying Lois.

My favorite part. I love how you had her figure it out seeing it in his eyes and then he admitting it was true. Great job!

Thanks for your comment I am glad you enjoyed it. I said I would something for the challenge lol :-)
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