I have begun my re-read, and I noticed two typos that are just getting to me.
except to learn that it had been hit orchestrated by some shadowy underworld figure known as “The Boss”.
I am pretty sure it should be "a hit".
The Metropolis Star was closest newspaper, but he hoped never to be that desperate for a paycheck.
I am pretty sure this should be "was the closest newspaper".
So far things flow well, but I am not that far in, so that does not say much.
