Sorry for chiming in so late on this but I just finished Wrong Lois (LOVED it) on the archive and rushed over to see if the next volume in the trilogy was available - yay!
I'm getting the biggest kick out of the way Lois keeps calling Clark "Chuck." What IS the guy's name anyway??
Really enjoying the creative and seamless mixture of canon from the show and your clever and subtle variations.
One small constructive criticism which I hope you won't mind - I noticed a tendency to repeat certain phrases a bit too often (to me) in Wrong Lois, and that had a tendency to pull me out of the flow of the story. The two phrases were "Lois pressed her lips together" and "...waved the comment out of the air." Perhaps those phrases could be modified somewhat in Book 2 so that they aren't repeated too often?
Loving this, Virginia, and on to part 3...
V
