I have to agree with most of the other comments here: this is intriguing, promising, and not too far-fetched.
The language issue is something that - in my opinion - is glossed over in far too many SciFi shows, so I'm glad to see it addressed here. I also like the fact that the two languages have so little in common as to be almost unrecognizable as language by the other party - that would make sense, given that these languages evolved on different planets. I'll be looking forward to the sequels!
I was a little bit confused about one thing, though: I can hardly imagine Lois not immediately realizing that she's not on Earth anymore. The fact that she would even entertain the notion that this might be *Africa* rings very untrue to me, given that she is an educated woman, and a genuinely smart one at that.
But really, in the grand scheme of things, that's just a nitpick. Keep them coming, please!
