Dynamite story, Hasini! I'm hooked. I want to know what happens when Lois wakes up. I want to know where Lucy is and whether or not her disappearance is linked to the attempt on Lois. I want to see Asha jar Clark out of his mood. And I want to know who the dead body by the phone was in the prologue.
You've presented a very intricate, very believable plot so far. I, too an eager to see what happens in the next chapter.