Love the flashback. It's funny, for one, but also it adds a haunting poignancy.

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They wanted him to kill his wife.
Nice echo of "Dead Lois Walking"

And now Lucy, too! More and more curious.

I am glad you included the perspectives of Martha and Sam. It adds a lot to the story. Also I get the impression that they may be doing a better job of holding on to their hope than Clark is.

Nice moments with Martha and Clark.

I loved this chapter, Hasini.

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