I like that you've given Lois and Clark a good six months to work together. Things aren't 'new' between them--by now they'd be fairly used to each other, comfortable around each other, settled into working as partners. The fact that they have been in each other's lives a bit, witnessed day-to-day stuff, I think adds more to them becoming close and (hopefully
) falling for each other. There's more 'history' between them and more for them to gain from each other.
Lana...wow. You've made her equally as easy to cringe at as in the series
. Great job! She is just so perfectly annoying and stuck up. Clark, come to your senses ASAP!
I am very much looking forward to the Ball. I can only imagine how handsome Clark will be when he shows up. And this Lois acknowledges the attraction, so she's sure to be swept off her feet. Can not wait!
Awesome!
Laura
