Really interesting piece - very powerful and insightful. It drew me in with the sad look at his life as a teenager, and I can definitely believe that that feeling of being alone, disconnected in a fundamental way from the rest of the world, would persist throughout his life. That at every low point in his life, he'd come back to that feeling. Great job!


You can find my stories as Groobie on the nfic archives and Susan Young on the gfic archives. In other words, you know me as Groobie. wink