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"Jor-El was wrong."
"Used to."
"Lois."

You've shown that often the shortest, simplest sentences are the most powerful.

I love the last line of the story. With that one line, you've managed to turn what was an otherwise incredibly depressing piece into one of hope. (And I say that even though I've always disliked the whole reincarnation premise.)

Joy,
Lynn

p.s., I had been sure, as I was reading the earlier parts of the story, that you would end with Lois telling Clark, while they were in his special "betwixt and between" place that he was not alone anymore. Silly me...