Many thanks to everyone who commented. Remember, I'm using your comments to decide whether or not this story needs a fourth part or Epilogue.

Lady Loisette: wave

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Hmm... Are you spying on me? Just like with the first part I posted a new chapter of my currently running story earlier today. goofy
I guess great minds post alike. wink Wait. [Linked Image] Where is it?

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I liked this part. The bit where Lois almost burns Clark's shirt and her plan to have Clark be struck by lightning, especially the final moment were my favorite parts.
Thanks. I guess this mix-mashed story actually draws from 3 episodes.

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I'm looking forward to part 3.
hyper I'm feeling much more sure about my rewrite of Part 3 than the first 2 drafts. Thanks for reading.


Laura: Do you know how much your love of WAFF inspires us writers? I know I look at your FDK for other writers and think to myself 'would Laura like this?' I'm glad to see you did. smile

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I really enjoyed Part 2 of the story, Virginia. Great dialog and such fun use of the Lois' powers grin.
Banter is much more fun to write than arguing.

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It was just the cherry she didn’t need upon the top of her sundae of a day.
This sentence near the beginning of the story was a great starting off point. Loved the wordage hyper.
Thanks. I often think in terms of food metaphors, and Lois being a lover of ice cream... I always worry that I'll tip over the edge into corny / cheeseyville.

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Really enjoyed this dialog. Very fun...could just picture this back and forth notworthy rotflol lol GREAT!!!
Clark making fun of his lunkheadness is always fun.

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Enjoyed this part, also. Great writing--you've kept with the feel of the episode, but made this really unique, too. dance
I had great Beta readers who kept pushing me to drop the original canon dialogue and come up with something unique.

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“You say that now, but can you imagine me PMSing with these powers?
rotflol rotflol rotflol This-Was-Great!!!
My guess is that Ultra Woman's invulnerability would reduce her PMS symptoms, but she's in full-out panic mode here.

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Ahhh...Lovely WAFFYiness grin
This is where I edited to please you. My Betas thought Clark's original corny joke killed the WAFFy mood.

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Whoa--big cliff-hanger here! Can't wait for more grovel.
Part 3 is written and will post next weekend. I like cliffies. [Linked Image]

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Awesome story, Virginia--really enjoying it!
Thank you. [Linked Image]


groobie: Thanks for commenting. smile

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I love this image. clap This quiet, tender way of Clark helping Lois deal with the powers...lovely! smile Looking forward to the conclusion. smile
That's one of the things that I love about Clark. The more spastic Lois gets doesn't impact Clark's calmness.

VirginiaR.
"On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling"
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"clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.